If you had to write a poem for your wolf, how would it be?

TenderPaws · Post by **TenderPaws** » Sat May 18, 2013 7:05 am

If you had to write a poem for your wolf character, OC, etc, how would it be?

I guess mine is already shown in my signature... xD I made it for my white wolf OC :3
But I can post it here for those that might not see it:

"Lone white wolf
Travels through the woodland snow
Behind her trail
The last lingering threads of twilight fade
Across the frozen lake
The rising moon is a majestic mandarin dome
The wolf's markings may glow and shine under the moon's light
To protect and guard the innocent from the darkest forest knights..."

(I had to shorten it up in my sig)

Post by **Jeames** » Sat May 18, 2013 7:54 am

Oooh, interesting, I really like yours!
I chose my main character Jeamesero to write a poem about. He's actually a wolf anthro and a shape-shifter, but on here he's just a wolf, of course. c;
The poem really represents his personality, as he's crazy and depressed, but acts naive and kind towards others around him.

A big smile in the light,
In the sight
Of everyone.
But what is truly misleading
Is the fake smile he’s representing.
From behind this iron mask of laughter
Is an iron mask of fear.
Of anger and desperation.
Of the craziness he’s hiding.
Of the wish to be once happy again.
A big smile in the light,
In the sight
Of everyone.
But a crazy expression, anger and no happiness,
In the darkness,
Out of sight,
Out of mind.

TenderPaws · Post by **TenderPaws** » Sat May 18, 2013 7:58 am

Jeames wrote:Oooh, interesting, I really like yours!
I chose my main character Jeamesero to write a poem about. He's actually a wolf anthro and a shape-shifter, but on here he's just a wolf, of course. c;
The poem really represents his personality, as he's crazy and depressed, but acts naive and kind towards others around him.

A big smile in the light,
In the sight
Of everyone.
But what is truly misleading
Is the fake smile he’s representing.
From behind this iron mask of laughter
Is an iron mask of fear.
Of anger and desperation.
Of the craziness he’s hiding.
Of the wish to be once happy again.
A big smile in the light,
In the sight
Of everyone.
But a crazy expression, anger and no happiness,
In the darkness,
Out of sight,
Out of mind.

Oh wow, I really like yours too

Thank you though!
I love various personalized wolves, to know their colors, the way they are, etc xD so I really find this fun and super interesting.
He seems like a wolf that is needing some caring love <3

Post by **Jeames** » Sat May 18, 2013 8:54 am

Same. c:
I might write some more poems for my other OCs, as this topic got me writing poems again just now. xD

Yes, he does. <3 Well, actually he gets the love he needs, but he sees himself as someone who doesn't deserve it. The sad little guy...

TenderPaws · Post by **TenderPaws** » Sat May 18, 2013 8:56 am

Jeames wrote:Same. c:
I might write some more poems for my other OCs, as this topic got me writing poems again just now. xD

Yes, he does. <3 Well, actually he gets the love he needs, but he sees himself as someone who doesn't deserve it. The sad little guy...

Haha great! xD I actually feel like writing more poems too lol (even though I'm really bad at them xp )

:/ Aw noo... poor guy, I wish I could cuddle him ; . ;
Maybe my OC and yours can be friends? xD

La Striata · Post by **La Striata** » Sat May 18, 2013 2:57 pm

TenderPaws wrote:If you had to write a poem for your wolf character, OC, etc, how would it be?

Terrible.

TenderPaws · Post by **TenderPaws** » Sat May 18, 2013 3:50 pm

La Striata wrote:
TenderPaws wrote:If you had to write a poem for your wolf character, OC, etc, how would it be?
Terrible.

Uhm... ok. Thanks for your rude intervention I guess.

Post by **Jeames** » Sat May 18, 2013 4:10 pm

TenderPaws wrote:Uhm... ok. Thanks for your rude intervention I guess.

I think he or she meant his/her poems would be terrible. c;
But yeah, they could possibly be friends? xD

Still thinking of a few poems for my other OCs so I can post them here, but I've got a terrible writer's block at the moment...

TenderPaws · Post by **TenderPaws** » Sat May 18, 2013 4:18 pm

Jeames wrote:I think he or she meant his/her poems would be terrible. c;
But yeah, they could possibly be friends? xD

Still thinking of a few poems for my other OCs so I can post them here, but I've got a terrible writer's block at the moment...

I hope so :/
Yeah sure they could xD even though my wolf is very wise she can also be very playful and joyful whenever she wants to be :3
She's also the example of being kind and sweet so I guess that's a helpful thing for your OC? xD

Oh don't worry lol, I can only write poems whenever I have that click in my brain that normally only lasts a second with tons of inspirational phrases for the poem. Though, as I'm done writing it my brain just shuts itself off. xD

Post by **Jeames** » Mon May 20, 2013 10:04 am

I wrote another poem, this time for my OC Shun. He's actually the shy, kind half brother of Jeamesero. c;

Bright amber eyes,
One dark,
One light.
Lurking in the shadows of the night,
Beware of these sharp teeth
For they can take away a life.
Rip and tear,
No single drop of movement left.
It’s those weak ones who must fear
The dark shadow of the forest itself.
But danger is a lie.
Don’t fool yourself by the shadow’s appearance,
It’s nor deadly, nor scary.
Nor something that can make you die.
It’s the lies
That make this shadow a shadow of fear and unknown,
As it’s just a wolf, all alone.
Bright amber eyes,
One dark,
One light.
Holding a bright
Sparkle in them,
For whatever’s still done right.

I like my first one about Jeamesero more, though.

TenderPaws · Post by **TenderPaws** » Mon May 20, 2013 11:36 am

Jeames wrote:I wrote another poem, this time for my OC Shun. He's actually the shy, kind half brother of Jeamesero. c;

Bright amber eyes,
One dark,
One light.
Lurking in the shadows of the night,
Beware of these sharp teeth
For they can take away a life.
Rip and tear,
No single drop of movement left.
It’s those weak ones who must fear
The dark shadow of the forest itself.
But danger is a lie.
Don’t fool yourself by the shadow’s appearance,
It’s nor deadly, nor scary.
Nor something that can make you die.
It’s the lies
That make this shadow a shadow of fear and unknown,
As it’s just a wolf, all alone.
Bright amber eyes,
One dark,
One light.
Holding a bright
Sparkle in them,
For whatever’s still done right.

I like my first one about Jeamesero more, though.

Wow!

I love both of the poems, I think they're really well and greatly done. <3
You surely have talent xD They seem like interesting wolves

Bellwolf1579535 · Post by **Bellwolf1579535** » Tue May 21, 2013 9:56 am

Wolf, wolf,
In the Mexican Gulf,
Run, Run,
Go and have some fun.

Nordue · Post by **Nordue** » Tue May 21, 2013 6:53 pm

Since this topic involves creating poetry about characterized wolves, I feel it is more suited to Wolf Multimedia.

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