Twilight Spirits

Griffinsong · Post by **Griffinsong** » Sun Oct 04, 2009 5:54 pm

Didn't see a topic like this, so I decided to make one.

What are your thoughts on the wolf comic Twilight Spirits? Even if you dislike the sparkly wolves.

Link to website, for thy uninitiated: http://twilightspirits.weebly.com/

SolitaryHowl · Post by **SolitaryHowl** » Sun Oct 04, 2009 7:47 pm

Scanned what they had on the website.

I have a couple of beefs with it:

- Unrealistic wolves. I know it's artistic license, but it's just too much.
- Spelling mistakes.
- webpage is not even close to being finished.
- anatomy errors

Songdog · Post by **Songdog** » Sun Oct 04, 2009 10:15 pm

They were one of the comics I destroyed in my review:

Twilight Spirits: I’ll be honest, I’m not even able to read this comic. My eyes hurt when I try. The colors. I could bark about all of the sparkley wolves out there, but you know what? If you want to have a blue wolf, go ahead. Just please don’t open up MS Paint and use the default blue. PLEASE add some grey to dull down the brightness. At least try to make it look natural. I never get why the wolves have fancy colors, but just them. Not the deer or the birds or the bears. And it’s rarely (if ever explained) But besides that. There’s something about the style that’s just so…generic. Speaking of generic, there are three evil wolves, each of a solid dark grey with sunken faces and evil looking faces. Yes. I’m serious. Just open up the book of clichés. I believe this artist speaks English for their first language, so there’s really no excuse for the horrid dialog and numerous spelling and grammar errors. This comic is more or less pretty generic.

From:
http://songdog-strayfang.deviantart.com ... /27219717/

One of the comics I completely disliked =D Really had no redeeming qualities.

Blightwolf · Post by **Blightwolf** » Wed Oct 07, 2009 8:55 am

Basically, I agree with Songdog by some parts - the comic is too... much. All the colors and anatomical weirdness... but it could be worse, I reckon. I'm not used to viewing comic books from that calibery.

wolfy646foxdog · Post by **wolfy646foxdog** » Fri Nov 13, 2009 4:47 pm

Not to go against the Mods. but i think it was Cool! I mean sure some of the stuff was unrealistic but that's good in comics and graphic novels.I thought it rocked!

Keawolf · Post by **Keawolf** » Tue Dec 08, 2009 5:43 am

Everyone has their own style of drawing and how they want to show their creativity. I can't say that "Twilight Spirits" is a comic I would read as there are many spelling errors and a lack of professionally, however, I will give credit for someone so young to be able to dedicate her time to her artwork. Personally, I do prefer more, realistic wolf comics, such as "Off-White". "Off White" Is an example of a comic that was done very well.

98765Wolf · Post by **98765Wolf** » Tue Dec 08, 2009 7:01 am

i have nver heard of is sorry

AshWolf Forever · Post by **AshWolf Forever** » Wed Dec 09, 2009 6:26 pm

Hi.
I checked the link and might add that you should put on sunglasses first.
That said, it is drawn really well. Other than that, there really isn't enough of the story up for me to say one way or the other. blueshinewolf is a good artist, but... is it just me or do most wolf comics look like they're a cross between Balto and The (Anime) Jungle Book?
Granted, I've only read three:
The Blackblood Alliance, this one, and Of Paws and Wings, a link I found on the site.

But is there a "animated wolf" reference book I missed?

AshWolf Forever
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Griffinsong · Post by **Griffinsong** » Thu Dec 10, 2009 6:53 pm

I would ask people to reserve judgment right now: http://blueshinewolf.deviantart.com/journal/28530708/

Apparently she's aiming to redo it.

Songdog · Post by **Songdog** » Thu Dec 10, 2009 9:24 pm

Griffinsong wrote:I would ask people to reserve judgment right now: http://blueshinewolf.deviantart.com/journal/28530708/

Apparently she's aiming to redo it.

Reserve judgment? Just because she's redoing it doesn't mean we can't form opinions on what's already been done. Maybe the redone pages will be nice and pretty and the characters won't be generic and the plot won't be lulzy cliche.

But what has been made very much is.

Griffinsong · Post by **Griffinsong** » Sat Dec 12, 2009 5:58 pm

Songdog wrote:
Griffinsong wrote:I would ask people to reserve judgment right now: http://blueshinewolf.deviantart.com/journal/28530708/

Apparently she's aiming to redo it.
Reserve judgment? Just because she's redoing it doesn't mean we can't form opinions on what's already been done. Maybe the redone pages will be nice and pretty and the characters won't be generic and the plot won't be lulzy cliche.

But what has been made very much is.

I mostly meant reserve judgment on whether or not it will continue to be cliched. Probably should have clarified. ^^"

Sanna92 · Post by **Sanna92** » Mon Dec 14, 2009 4:38 pm

it looks alright but i wont judge on something ive never seen or read before

CrystaClem · Post by **CrystaClem** » Sat Jan 09, 2010 6:57 pm

Could someone please point out where the anatomy errors are? My style is a lot like that artist's, just wondering where I can improve.

Snowmuzzle · Post by **Snowmuzzle** » Sun Jan 10, 2010 1:05 pm

The words "tragic past", "chosen one" and "evil" in Moon's character page don't make me too optimistic about its originality or intelligent content. :/

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