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Re: Off-White

Post by Kamerah » Sat Dec 04, 2010 8:21 am

I love this comic! Great artwork, interesting plot, realistic wolves!
Only a family both loving and true.
May conquer the evil, so ancient, so new.
As they fight to uncover what secrets they share
behold in their journey how painful is care.

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Re: Off-White

Post by portia » Sat Dec 04, 2010 8:33 am

It is so far the only online comic that I have read and I love it; the design and illustrations are fantastic and the comedy, dialogue and plot keep it entertaining. It leaves me hanging for more each new page.
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Re: Off-White

Post by - Yana - » Mon Dec 20, 2010 10:11 pm

Fantastic comic, in my opinion. I love how realistic the art is, it's so beautiful! The story plot is fascinating and quite original. The only thing I don't like is how slow it takes to update another page, but it's worth the wait ^^
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I also don't like Kaya too much. She just popped out of nowhere. Her 'relationship' with Iki seems rushed and unrealistic.

It kind of stinks that Isa hardly speaks, and that even though Raigho is her father, she still calls him Raigho.

But does this make the comic bad? No. It is exiting and keeps you on the edge of your seat, and Iki and Jera make you fall out laughing. 'Nuf said.

I agree with all of which you've said.

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Re: Off-White

Post by -Ratchet » Thu Dec 23, 2010 1:48 pm

I love the comic :3


They are fantastic artists and writers. I can't wait for more pages =3
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Re: Off-White

Post by Maia Huntress » Thu Dec 23, 2010 2:03 pm

I just finished reading the newest pages, and they're awesome! It's really sad though.... :(

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Re: Off-White

Post by shadowwolf966 » Fri Dec 24, 2010 9:34 am

Looks good. :)

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Re: Off-White

Post by Kamerah » Wed Dec 29, 2010 4:59 am

Maia Huntress wrote:I just finished reading the newest pages, and they're awesome! It's really sad though.... :(
:( Yes, I hate sad stories, but at least Raigho's pack is still alive.
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As they fight to uncover what secrets they share
behold in their journey how painful is care.

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Re: Off-White

Post by April » Wed Dec 29, 2010 4:33 pm

Anythng new up yet? It's slow but it's worth it. If it were me making it it'd take like... 20x longer Xp
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Re: Off-White

Post by Dostluk » Thu Dec 30, 2010 5:54 am

Off-White... Such the most amazing graphic novel I have ever seen! I love the others, but it is in my opinion the best. The Mythology is amazing, I love to read, is a pity we have to wait for months to get another page up, but it's always worth it. ^^
Oh, And I saw something very interesting and funny, I noticed that, in page 44, (http://www.off-white.eu/?subpage=44) Jera has got evil's horns XDD It's soooooo funny. She is thinking about interfere between Kaya and Iki.


Kamerah wrote::( Yes, I hate sad stories, but at least Raigho's pack is still alive.
Well, I think Gebo and Kaya might join Raigho's pack. And I wish Kaya become Iki's mate, they're are soooo cute together!!! ^^
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Re: Off-White

Post by wolfluvr101 » Tue Jan 18, 2011 11:11 am

This is such an amazing comic! It has such a good plot and the details are amazing!
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Re: Off-White

Post by LunarWolfVII » Fri Jan 21, 2011 3:28 am

I know that one! XD
Akreon's been on my deviantART watch list for a long time for all the artist's work (not sure if it's a guy or a girl, no gender is listed on the profile), not just the comic , so I automatically get her new comic pages when they come out, awesome artist.
I like that they're not only good at drawing wolves, they pay the same amount of attention to the detail and quality of the other creatures in the comic as well, they're very well-rounded.
though I'll be honest, I'm really not getting where the plot's going right now :? but i'm sure that'll clear up with time, gotta give them time to "weave the web" first. lol
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Re: Off-White

Post by alethe » Sat Feb 12, 2011 7:50 pm

I really do love this comic.

Sorry to say (if you go to the older posts you will know what I'm talking about) I haven't been able to do the video, my computer crashed while I was working on it. My dad got it back up but, all my files are gone.


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Re: Off-White

Post by April » Sat Feb 12, 2011 8:45 pm

I am oh so jealous of their landscapes...they look even prettier than real life XD
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Re: Off-White

Post by alethe » Sat Feb 12, 2011 9:29 pm

I know, right! I wish I could do that!


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Re: Off-White

Post by Victorious » Thu Feb 17, 2011 10:26 pm

Though I still love the comic, I'm not too thrilled about how the artists update their work.

If you ask me, the Twitter account is pointless. Because the stuff they write in the Twitter updates are the same as the updates on the main site.

They also tend to go away for months at a time and come back saying: "Well, now that our break is over," and I'm at the computer like: "Wait, they were on break? Stuff like THAT should be posted on the Twitter.

And yes, I do realize they need to take breaks.
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