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Re: Off-White

Post by alethe » Thu Mar 17, 2011 10:45 am

I do agree with you. But with a comic like that, they need the breaks. Plus, I think they are collage students. It is hard to be a collage student, just ask my mom...


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Re: Off-White

Post by Seewah » Sun Apr 03, 2011 5:52 pm

Hmm... I just read it up to the newest pages, and so far I'm not liking what I see... :|

Sure, the art is beautiful, but honestly, it's story not art that makes a good comic. It looks like it's turning into another anti-human/hunting story. Look artists, hunting isn't in any way wrong. There I said it. The part where the wolves were getting shot and just left to rot made me confirm this suspicion of an anti hunter story. There is no sane sport hunter in the world who leaves a kill. None. Hunting takes HOURS of patience. And the fact that the hunters massacred a pack of wolves to find one was a stupid idea. At least, I think this was what happened. It doesn't matter though, the hunters killed wolves and left them to rot, which is meant to portray hunters as evil. Also, the amount of blood when the wolves were biting and getting shot? Ridiculous. I can't take a comic seriously when it looks like that.
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Re: Off-White

Post by Victorious » Thu Apr 14, 2011 9:34 pm

river6 wrote:I do agree with you. But with a comic like that, they need the breaks. Plus, I think they are collage students. It is hard to be a collage student, just ask my mom...
I didn't say they shouldn't take breaks, I said it would be nice if let us know they were taking breaks.
Seewah wrote:Hmm... I just read it up to the newest pages, and so far I'm not liking what I see... :|

Sure, the art is beautiful, but honestly, it's story not art that makes a good comic. It looks like it's turning into another anti-human/hunting story. Look artists, hunting isn't in any way wrong. There I said it. The part where the wolves were getting shot and just left to rot made me confirm this suspicion of an anti hunter story. There is no sane sport hunter in the world who leaves a kill. None. Hunting takes HOURS of patience. And the fact that the hunters massacred a pack of wolves to find one was a stupid idea. At least, I think this was what happened. It doesn't matter though, the hunters killed wolves and left them to rot, which is meant to portray hunters as evil. Also, the amount of blood when the wolves were biting and getting shot? Ridiculous. I can't take a comic seriously when it looks like that.
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Re: Off-White

Post by shenzie » Mon Apr 18, 2011 12:22 pm

I really love this comic. But the improvments fail sometime.


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Re: Off-White

Post by IPup » Fri Aug 05, 2011 8:56 am

luuuvvv off white!!
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Re: Off-White

Post by Legendary-Taco » Sun Aug 21, 2011 2:27 am

I love Off-White! Such a great story line, as well as the art. Akreon puts the perfect balance of humor and seriousness in her work, simply put, it's just fantastic XD
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Re: Off-White

Post by Toralu » Tue Aug 23, 2011 8:36 am

I've read it ^^ the pictures are amazing and of course what I love best that there is a sense of humour in it not just plain mystical stuffs. It has humours C:
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Re: Off-White

Post by AlisanWolf » Fri Sep 23, 2011 1:34 pm

I LOVE This comic, I think tomorrow will come the next "Page" (episode)... I'll wait and 1000000000..000000 years until this comic will be full.
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Re: Off-White

Post by Bright-Heart » Tue Oct 11, 2011 7:14 am

I found the comic while looking up wolf clips on utube! the pictures are amazing! and the whole thing is EXCITING!
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Re: Off-White

Post by Katherine Vampire » Tue Dec 27, 2011 7:00 am

Their is art is just amazing. I found some pages on DeviantArt and i liked them... so i started reading them regular.... i can't wait for the next page to come.

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Re: Off-White

Post by Tita » Wed Dec 28, 2011 12:30 pm

This is a comic? I'm not too big on them, but it seems fun.
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Re: Off-White

Post by Bright-Heart » Thu Dec 29, 2011 12:15 am

actually, it takes place on earth, its just that the nature is taking over agian in the comic. by the way you frazed it, it sounded like you meant it was on another planet :wink:
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Re: Off-White

Post by Tita » Thu Dec 29, 2011 12:42 am

Bright-Heart wrote:I found the comic while looking up wolf clips on utube! the pictures are amazing! and the whole thing is EXCITING!
The art is definitely beautiful, from what I've seen of it. :3 I'll have to look into this.
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Re: Off-White

Post by kiba wolf fang » Thu Dec 29, 2011 1:30 am

I love this comic, its very well done.

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Re: Off-White

Post by Aleu254 » Thu Jan 12, 2012 9:30 pm

I'm glad you posted this! I'm reading the prologue, I'm loving the art. It seems pretty good.
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